The Insider's Intuition
This crime thriller story is something for everyone, combining ambition of higher power, to actual higher power, but with a bit of help from having super powers. This is the first book in a series.
Chapter 1
My name is Tom Trello, and this is my story. This story is like every story you've ever heard, but also nothing like you have ever expected. Some things happen that are barely believable, probably because they're not somewhat. Being extremely confident and charasmatic often feels like a superpower, especially when there are so many that are not. I’ve always had a knack for reading people. No, scratch that. I can control people. It’s not something I go around advertising—imagine what the SEC would say about a stockbroker who can nudge a CEO into making a billion-dollar merger. But here’s the kicker: having powers doesn’t make life easier. It makes it messy, dangerous, and a hell of a lot more complicated.
Now let's start at the beginning, and not the sort of beginning where I tell you that I grew up in a lower-middle class household and that my mother was a teacher, teaching 5th grade English in a suburban school while my father was the sales manager at the local car dealership: I’m 24, fresh-faced, and just ambitious enough to think I can conquer the financial world without losing my soul. That’s why I landed at Harper, McDermot & Associates, one of the most cutthroat brokerages on Wall Street. My boss, Harry McDermot, is the kind of guy who’s seen everything twice and pretends to be unimpressed by the universe itself. Gruff, sharp, and way too observant for comfort, Harry is both my mentor and my biggest critic. He knows I’m talented. He just doesn’t know how talented.
The first day of this exceptional adventure started just like any other, getting up at the asscrack of dawn and injecting what feels like an entire planet's worth of coffee into my system by the time the sun's fully risen, phone in hand, scrolling through endless useless emails about muscle growth and messages about stuff that my cat would shit out on the carpet. I rolled into the office in a suit that was a little too expensive for my paycheck and sat at my desk, exactly as the floor bell rang for day's open. The buzz of the trading floor sent shivers down my spine. This is the sort of thing I live for, making obsene trades and brokering crazy deals. It's just a shame I don't see the complete upside of it, yet. It wasn't until the day was nearing its end that everything started to look concerning, but after working for 18 hours I couldn't give a shit, but as I was heading to the door Harry pulled me into his office with the sort of look that did not fill you with confidence.
“Sit,” he said, and I did.
He tossed a file onto his desk, and it slid toward me. “Tell me, Trello, do you know the difference between making money and getting caught making money?”
I swallowed hard. “A good lawyer?”
He smirked, but his eyes were sharp. “Loyalty. You play along, you win. You ask too many questions, you end up on the outside looking in. Or worse.”
I opened the file. Inside were reports—real, raw numbers of just how deep the fraud went. Entire neighborhoods of foreclosed homes, millions of people set up to fail, banks double-dipping on bad loans, then betting against them. It was a house of cards built on the backs of the unsuspecting, and here I was, staring at the blueprint of how to keep it going.
“You want to make it here?” Harry asked, lighting a cigar like this was just another Tuesday. “Then understand this: we don’t make the rules. We just know how to break them better than everyone else.”
The thing is, I already knew how to break the rules. I was just starting to wonder if I wanted to.
Chapter 2
It was 11pm, the conference room was packed, the air thick with sweat, stress, and the bitter sting of stale coffee. Traders, analysts, risk managers—every department had been crammed in here, a sea of suits and pale, drawn faces. No one spoke. No one even dared to check their phones. We all knew what was happening outside these glass walls. The market was cratering, and we were free-falling with it.
Henry Grayson, the firm’s CEO, stood at the head of the table, sleeves rolled up, tie loosened—something I’d never seen before. Usually, the man was a picture of control, an untouchable force that moved through the firm with quiet authority. But now, he looked… tired. Pissed. Desperate.
He set his palms on the table and leaned forward. His voice, when he finally spoke, was low and clipped, the words slicing through the suffocating silence.
“This,” he said, pointing at the Bloomberg terminal in front of him, “is the worst goddamn financial disaster we have ever seen.”
No one moved. No one breathed.
He continued, scanning the room like a general about to send his troops into a hopeless battle. “Liquidity is vanishing. Banks are freezing credit lines. Hedge funds are blowing up by the hour. And as of this morning, we are dangerously close to being on that list.”
A murmur rippled through the room. Someone cursed under their breath.
Grayson didn’t flinch. “We have exposure to subprime mortgage-backed securities that are now—let me be very clear—worthless.” His jaw tightened. “If we don’t fix our positions immediately, we’re done. Gone. Buried.”
A hand shot up. James Adler, head of risk. “Henry, if we try to unload now, we’ll get pennies on the dollar—if we can sell at all. No one is buying.”
Grayson’s eyes flashed. “Which is why we’re not dumping. We’re hedging, we’re restructuring, and we’re making sure we don’t get wiped off the goddamn map.”
Another voice cut through the tension. “And how exactly are we supposed to do that?” It was Rachel Kim, senior portfolio manager. “Every bank we deal with is in survival mode. Who’s taking the other side of these trades?”
Grayson exhaled sharply, pinching the bridge of his nose. “We have a few options left, but none of them are good.”
The room was silent again. The weight of what he wasn’t saying settled over us like a death sentence.
I shifted uncomfortably in my chair, my mind racing. I was still reeling from what Harry had shown me—my name, tied to suspicious trades that made it look like I had known this was coming. But I couldn’t think about that now. Not with the firm on the brink of collapse.
Grayson straightened, his voice hard. “I need every single one of you working to contain this. Trading, you will find counterparties who are still breathing. Risk, you will assess our damage in real time. Legal, compliance—I don’t care what it takes, but we will not go down without a fight.”
No one argued. There was nothing to argue about.
Grayson looked at each of us, his blue eyes sharp, almost daring us to break under the pressure. “This is it,” he said. “What we do in the next twenty-four hours determines whether we survive or get torn apart.”
I swallowed the lump in my throat.
This wasn’t just about the market anymore.
This was war.
Chapter 3
It was 11pm, the conference room was packed, the air thick with sweat, stress, and the bitter sting of stale coffee. Traders, analysts, risk managers—every department had been crammed in here, a sea of suits and pale, drawn faces. No one spoke. No one even dared to check their phones. We all knew what was happening outside these glass walls. The market was cratering, and we were free-falling with it.
Henry Grayson, the firm’s CEO, stood at the head of the table, sleeves rolled up, tie loosened—something I’d never seen before. Usually, the man was a picture of control, an untouchable force that moved through the firm with quiet authority. But now, he looked… tired. Pissed. Desperate.
He set his palms on the table and leaned forward. His voice, when he finally spoke, was low and clipped, the words slicing through the suffocating silence.
“This,” he said, pointing at the Bloomberg terminal in front of him, “is the worst goddamn financial disaster we have ever seen.”
No one moved. No one breathed.
He continued, scanning the room like a general about to send his troops into a hopeless battle. “Liquidity is vanishing. Banks are freezing credit lines. Hedge funds are blowing up by the hour. And as of this morning, we are dangerously close to being on that list.”
A murmur rippled through the room. Someone cursed under their breath.
Grayson didn’t flinch. “We have exposure to subprime mortgage-backed securities that are now—let me be very clear—worthless.” His jaw tightened. “If we don’t fix our positions immediately, we’re done. Gone. Buried.”
A hand shot up. James Adler, head of risk. “Henry, if we try to unload now, we’ll get pennies on the dollar—if we can sell at all. No one is buying.”
Grayson’s eyes flashed. “Which is why we’re not dumping. We’re hedging, we’re restructuring, and we’re making sure we don’t get wiped off the goddamn map.”
Another voice cut through the tension. “And how exactly are we supposed to do that?” It was Rachel Kim, senior portfolio manager. “Every bank we deal with is in survival mode. Who’s taking the other side of these trades?”
Grayson exhaled sharply, pinching the bridge of his nose. “We have a few options left, but none of them are good.”
The room was silent again. The weight of what he wasn’t saying settled over us like a death sentence.
I shifted uncomfortably in my chair, my mind racing. I was still reeling from what Harry had shown me—my name, tied to suspicious trades that made it look like I had known this was coming. But I couldn’t think about that now. Not with the firm on the brink of collapse.
Grayson straightened, his voice hard. “I need every single one of you working to contain this. Trading, you will find counterparties who are still breathing. Risk, you will assess our damage in real time. Legal, compliance—I don’t care what it takes, but we will not go down without a fight.”
No one argued. There was nothing to argue about.
Grayson looked at each of us, his blue eyes sharp, almost daring us to break under the pressure. “This is it,” he said. “What we do in the next twenty-four hours determines whether we survive or get torn apart.”
The fraud ran deep, woven into the very fabric of the firm's daily operations. It wasn't just a matter of bad trades or risky investments—it was a calculated scheme orchestrated by the executives at the top, using mid-level traders as unwitting pawns.
For years, Henry Grayson and his inner circle had been offloading toxic assets—subprime mortgage-backed securities, synthetic CDOs, and other ticking time bombs—onto their own clients while simultaneously betting against them through offshore entities and shadow accounts. They made billions in the lead-up to the crash, but now, as the market imploded, the walls were closing in.
To cover their tracks, the executives employed a brutal strategy: deflect, deny, and disappear. Mid-level traders, portfolio managers, and analysts were handed orders that they didn’t realize were designed to shield those at the top. They were instructed to shift losses between accounts, temporarily inflate valuations, and execute trades that had no economic purpose other than to obscure the firm’s exposure.
Some traders, particularly those new to the game, had no idea what they were being used for. Others, like James Adler in Risk, had started putting the pieces together but were too far in to back out. He had flagged anomalies before—massive positions shifting between offshore subsidiaries, sudden windfalls appearing just before earnings reports—but every time he pushed, he was met with stonewalling and thinly veiled threats.
And then there were the NDAs.
Anyone who got too close to the truth, who questioned orders a little too aggressively, was quietly pulled into a closed-door meeting with Legal. They would be handed a stack of paperwork—a non-disclosure agreement, a severance package, and an implicit ultimatum. Sign, take the money, and walk away. Or refuse and find yourself blacklisted in the industry, your career over before you could even think about blowing the whistle.
Rachel Kim had seen it firsthand. A junior trader in her team had stumbled onto an internal ledger that showed how the firm had been parking losses in off-balance-sheet vehicles. The next day, he was gone. No explanation, no goodbye email—just an empty desk and a whisper that he had ‘chosen to pursue other opportunities.’
The firm’s legal team was just as complicit. They structured the NDAs with ironclad language, ensuring that even the faintest mention of wrongdoing would trigger lawsuits so costly and relentless that few dared to challenge them. They didn’t just threaten financial ruin—they made it clear that personal reputations, futures, even families could be dragged into the mud if anyone stepped out of line.
And now, as the market teetered on collapse, the executives were in full survival mode. The traders they had manipulated were being positioned as scapegoats. If regulators or federal prosecutors came knocking, it wouldn’t be Grayson or his lieutenants who took the fall—it would be the mid-level employees, the ones who had executed the orders without knowing the full extent of the scheme.
That was the real game. Not just making money, but ensuring that when everything fell apart, someone else took the blame.
And for those of us in the room that night, we were beginning to realize: we were the ones being lined up for the slaughter.
I swallowed the lump in my throat.
This wasn’t just about the market anymore.
This was war.
Chapter 4
6:00 AM
I sat across from Harry in the dimly lit conference room, the city still cloaked in pre-dawn darkness. The trading floor outside was a ghost town for now, but in less than two hours, it would explode into chaos. Phones ringing off the hook. Screens flashing red. Careers evaporating in real time.
I leaned forward, rubbing his temples. He hadn’t slept. None of them had.
“We need to split the positions,” he said, his voice low but firm. “Sell them off in chunks. Spread them out across different funds, pension groups, even retail desks if we have to. A slight premium, but manageable. We make more back that way.”
Harry sighed, shaking his head. He looked even worse than I—dark circles under his eyes, shirt wrinkled, tie yanked loose. He had barely touched his coffee.
“That’s not going to work,” Harry muttered.
I frowned. “Why not?”
Harry leaned back, exhaling through his nose. “Because it assumes we still have the leverage to control pricing. We don’t.” He tapped the Bloomberg screen between them, showing the overnight carnage in Asia and Europe. “The second we start offloading these positions, the market will smell blood. Any premium we try to squeeze out will be erased in minutes.”
I clenched my jaw. “So you’re saying we just dump it all? Take whatever we can get?”
Harry exhaled sharply, staring down at the table. “I’m saying that if we don’t move fast, we won’t have a choice. Liquidity is vanishing. The longer we wait, the worse it gets.”
I leaned back, shaking my head. This was a nightmare. The idea of selling these toxic positions in bulk meant fire-sale prices—deep losses that could sink the firm completely. But Harry was right about one thing. If they hesitated too long, they wouldn’t even get that chance.
A long silence stretched between them.
I rubbed my face. “Jesus Christ.”
Harry just nodded. “Yeah.”
8:30 AM – Market Open
The trading floor was a battlefield.
Traders shouted into phones, voices hoarse from panic and desperation. Orders flew in at a speed no one could keep up with. Everyone was trying to cut their losses, hedge their exposure—anything to keep from being the next casualty.
But it was already too late for some.
At 9:15 AM, the first layoffs started.
Compliance was the first to go—most of them had no function in a crisis like this. Then came middle-office roles, back-office staff. By 10:30 AM, the cuts were hitting the trading desks.
I watched as security escorted Jeff Reynolds out. A veteran trader. Gone. Just like that.
“This is only the beginning,” Harry muttered beside him, arms crossed. His face was pale.
I felt sick.
By noon, the firm was in full collapse mode. Clients were pulling funds. Counterparties were refusing to trade. Liquidity was drying up faster than anyone had expected.
And then, at 12:45 PM, the email hit everyone’s inbox.
MANDATORY MEETING – 1:00 PM – ALL STAFF
My stomach twisted. They weren’t getting out of this. And deep down, he knew—by the end of the day, he might not have a job either. By the time Harry had finished the meeting, I could tell something terrible was going to happen, but even I could not forsee what actually happened.
4:00 PM - Debrief
The entire firm packed into the main conference room. No one spoke. No one checked their phones. There was nothing left to say, no new information to digest. Everyone already knew what was coming.
Tom stood near the back, arms crossed, jaw tight. Beside him, Harry looked like he had aged ten years in the past five hours.
At exactly 1:00 PM, Henry Grayson walked in. His tie was gone, his shirt sleeves rolled up, but the weight on his shoulders was obvious. He looked around at the hundred-plus employees—traders, analysts, assistants, secretaries—people who had built their lives around this firm.
He cleared his throat.
“As of today,” he said, voice low and steady, “this firm no longer exists.”
The room stayed dead silent.
Grayson sighed, rubbing a hand over his face before continuing. “Our counterparties have cut us off. Our credit lines are gone. The losses are beyond anything we can recover from. We are insolvent.”
Someone cursed under their breath.
Grayson looked up, scanning the room. “I want to make one thing clear. This was not a failure of this team. This was a systemic collapse. We got caught in the storm like everyone else. But that doesn’t change the outcome.” He exhaled. “Effective immediately, all trading activity is frozen. You will receive details regarding severance packages and final paychecks within the next 48 hours. Security will escort everyone out.”
A murmur rippled through the crowd. Someone slammed their hand against the table. Another person just stared at the floor, shaking their head in disbelief.
I barely heard any of it. My mind was racing.I had seen firms go under before, but never like this. Never this fast.
Harry muttered, “It’s over.”
I looked at him. “Just like that?”
Harry nodded grimly. “Just like that.”
That is the end of The Insider's Intuition. Thanks for reading.
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